
photo: Dale Rogerson
The Rest
The wagons had crossed the wide dusty prairie; and it had been a hard crossing as they made the pass, flanked by forlorn craggy peaks. There now below them was the valley filled with promise.
The descent into the canyon was far more gentle than they had expected. The party soon rested, dry and parched, next to the gurgling steam which flowed with a fluid more precious than gold. The cold crystal water relieved their thirst, and restored their spirits. Soon they would be in the promised land of Oregon.
(90 words)
Padre
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Dual Prompt Challenge:
Fandango – “Fluid”
Friday Fictioneer’s – Photo prompt above
‘Fluid more precious than gold’
Nice one! 🙂
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Water is certainly precious. Your story made me thirsty. Well told!
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I am always amazed at the fortitude of the first settlers. Nicely done.
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I did the Oregon Trail with my kids many moons ago. While we didn’t have the thirst, this brought back memories of the landscape.
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Your story was sweeter than mine! Good writing. You did a great job of painting a picture of the landscape. I’m still having trouble with that.
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Dear Padre,
You had me on the trail. Well done. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Toda
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Nice take, I’m sure it must have been like that
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I lived in Oregon from ages 10-14. Loved it. Still seem like the land of hope and promise to me.
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