Awash in Stillness
I have seen the sea in many a guise –
Her raging troughs deep and towering crests high –
And as a paper-smooth sheet without ripple or rise –
In which stillness reigns.
I have seen the sky in all its glory –
Bright blue, filled with fluttering birds in flight –
But also clothed in fog and mist –
Closing in, mimicking the stillness of the night.
I have seen the island stand alone –
Sentinel amid the wash-Β
In defiance of both wind and wave –
Unmoved in its silent stillness.
Padre
PIC AND A WORD CHALLENGE #167: Stillness
To click *like* is not enough. I have to say it in words: This poem I like. Feels like home to me. (I live beside the sea)
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Thank you ever so much for the kind appraisal
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Such succulent words. Wonderful response to the prompt. β€
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Namaste Padre, Happy New Year π
I paused to linger for a while reading your verse, all of which I enjoyed very much. Your poetry has depth and sensitivity, a palpable sense of feeling as if your journey through life impresses itself into your words. This particular poem is amongst my favourites not least because of the imagery it exudes. The photograph has a hypnotic, ethereal quality about it. Quite magical.
Thank you for sharing your work.
I came by way of Sammi’s Saturday Challenge, and hope to you will continue submitting verse.
Live in Love, Go in Peace. Namaste π
DN
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly hope that people gain some pleasure from my work, so your words are ever so encouraging.
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Namaste Padre π
I’m quite certain people do gain pleasure from your work and will again next verse you write π
Your Blog has a nice feel to it…a sense of calm permeates each page.
Until next time…
Namaste π
DN
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Wow! This is a masterpiece! Beautiful imagery.
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Thank you
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My pleasure!
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