Were they being followed? Neither could be sure, but there was that uneasiness of feeling, like they were being watched.
Stan stopped and listened, Julie clenching his hand tightly. Nothing.
They took a few more steps, was that an echo of their own footfalls or was it someone or something keeping pace with their movements?
“I knew we shouldn’t have come this way,” Julie whispered.
“But do you want to go back past whatever’s there?” he responded.
The clouds parted for a moment and a shadow of what seemed something human briefly fell upon the building they stood near.
Chills felt upon spines –
Trembling apprehension for
Shadows on the wall
Padre
Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille, July 24th 2019, shadows on the wall
A chilling tale in the making, Padre … 🙂
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Delightfully chilling! Nice write, Padre.
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Yep…goosebumps here.💚
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My goodness this is good! ❤️ I could feel the “shadow of what seemed something human briefly,” fall upon the building.
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A thriller chiller in haikai form! Clever and satisfying.
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That’s pretty great right there. Unsettling stuff.
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Very chilling and suspenseful write!
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Gulp! Love it!
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This was a captivating read Padre. Thank you for sharing it for OLN,
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Reblogged this on Everyday Strange and commented:
An eerie read from Padre’s Rambling.
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