Flood waters rising
Life pommeled on every side
In woe – senses drown –
But still in bloom despite it
Head held up against the flow
COLLEEN’S 2019 WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 145 #PHOTOPROMPT (photo above)
The tanka is a five lined poem with a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable form. It often centres on imagery, but today I have gone for emotive feel in the hope that the message that life’s pressures and assaults need not drown us. There is hope, and we can stand against the pains and concerns life deals us. Written on the first full day of my widowhood.
Padre
Melancholy yet hope filled, very nice. 😊
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What an uplifting message, Padre. I like it! ❤
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Interesting, I didn’t see a flood in there, but water nourishing the trees. Beautiful take!
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I like this. Traits of a survivor:))
Pat R
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