
A mere suggestion
Don’t be meek – your mind to speak
Express your desires
What is there for you to lose?
Just go for it – if you choose
Padre
WELCOME TO TANKA TUESDAY!
This week, Annette Rochelle Aben selected the words for the syllables only challenge. That means you can’t use those two words. You must find synonyms to replace them: Hint & Bold
Hmmm…let me think..
Everything!
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Those words just slipped out like that, didn’t they, Padre? What fun! ❤
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Yes! The important thing is to try, if it doesn’t work it is secondary!
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What a beautiful tanka! Loved it.
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This is so good
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Thank you
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Liked the closing couplet: it was bold 🙂
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Wise words – I would always choose to go for it, unless you’re jumping out into oncoming traffic 😉
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