placid
reservoir smooth
kinetic force disguised
until awakened as torrents
released
Padre
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placid
reservoir smooth
kinetic force disguised
until awakened as torrents
released
Padre
Padre's Ramblings 
caught the scene so well 🙂
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I love the movement in your poem!
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So much truth in your poem, Padre! I love it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalliero.blogspot.com
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The power of water is often disguised until you’re in it and feel its living current. Nothing can stand against it.
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Padre, this is excellent. I like how your words in a cinquain mimic the waterfall. It’s stunning!
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Wow that says it all. 💜
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